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Postby Pretty_Blossom » August 4th, 2005, 12:12 pm

I woke up with a start. Someone was sleeping in my bed!
It was a girl. The most beautiful thing in the world. I haven't seen anything like her in a long time.
She looked just like an angel. Of course, when I say She looked like an angel I don't mean The Angel, because no human can be that beautiful, but in a human scale, she was very beautiful.
Instead of doing what I had to do, I just sat there and watched her sleep. I knew I was only delaying the inevitable, but for the time be, I couldn't do anything else.
Ever since that deaf boy stumbled into my castle, no one has ever came in and slept so peacefully without running away.
I don't usually scare them away, I don't like to do those things, but the others do, so I was very surprised to see a girl in the castle.
Then she woke up, and saw me. I just sat there, doing nothing, but that was enough, she ran away too, like all the other living people that tried to visit my castle in the last millennia.
People don't like to stay around when you're a ghost.
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Postby KronKron » August 4th, 2005, 12:32 pm

carry on...
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Postby wizzard » August 4th, 2005, 12:37 pm

I think that was the end of it.

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Postby KronKron » August 4th, 2005, 12:39 pm

oh
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Postby Pretty_Blossom » August 4th, 2005, 12:41 pm

actually this one does have more planned, I just stopped writing it due to being busy.
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Part 2

Postby Pretty_Blossom » August 4th, 2005, 1:27 pm

I followed her through the wall quietly. She could get hurt running around like that in the dark. Also one of the others might wake up and find her. That would be very bad.
She didn't go very far - just until the end of the corridor, to one of the other bedrooms. She wasn't alone in the house - there were other live ones around. There were more live people in there at once than I've seen since the mob tried to burn us down. An old woman with only 2 teeth, a couple that looked like the parents of the girl - she got her looks from her mother, a young boy and a baby.
I hid myself behind the door and listened. The girl was very upset - she didn't notice I was dead, she just claimed there was a strange boy in her room. The parents didn't believe her. There weren't any living people for miles around. The old woman, on the other hand, said that the ouse was haunted. She was right, but nobody believed her.
The name of the girl was Jessica. Her father called her that when they talked. What a lovely name. I could sing it out loud all night.
I kept quiet and hidden while the went to my room to see what happened. The old woman stayed with the small kids. She was looking at me and smirking.
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Postby Findtherma » August 4th, 2005, 2:14 pm

Very nice so far. Looking forward to reading some more.

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Chapter 3

Postby Pretty_Blossom » January 3rd, 2006, 8:37 pm

"So, a peeping tom ghost, eh?" Said the old woman with a smirk on her face. The young boy was craning his neck to see who she was talking to, but I was well hidden. I backed away through the wall and went after the girl. Her parents were going through the room looking for a live boy, and of course they couldn't find one. Eventually they tired of the search.
"There is no-one here, darling, now go back to sleep" said the mother. The father nodded in agreement: "You are just nervous about a new house. There is nothing to worry about. Tomorrow the movers will be here, and you will have your things to make this room feel like home".
Movers? Your things? This family was planning on staying in my castle!
The parents were already leaving the room, and Jessica was sitting on the bed, looking worried still. I was torn between wanting her to stay and wanting to do the right thing. I've decided to wait until morning before I come out. One night couldn't hurt, and she was so beautiful.
I watched her curl up in bed again. She stayed awake for a while longer, staring at the place where she saw me last. Finally she fell asleep.
I stood there watching her all night long.
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Postby Spirit » January 5th, 2006, 10:25 am

Carry on :)
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Postby Pretty_Blossom » January 5th, 2006, 12:26 pm

working on it...
I'm still trying to figure out how to make the introductions of all the characters, but I'll get there.
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Postby cheery_littlebottom » January 6th, 2006, 12:34 pm

go, Blossom! Go!
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Postby sam_vimes » May 19th, 2006, 10:11 am

blossom...... where'd that go.... finish.. please. you cant start and end... pleasepleaseplease.
it would be like PTerry half writing night watch and putting it on the shelves without the ending.

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Postby biscuit » September 29th, 2007, 6:22 am

Hey Pretty Blossom, just wondered if you ever got around to writing any more of this story, really like what you've written so far :)
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Postby not here right now » September 29th, 2007, 8:41 pm

Yes pretty blossom, where is the rest of this ghostly story?
He sees himself as the saviour of the world
His will is strong and he's feeling good
Ive known him since the first taste of beer
I will meet him many times in a year
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Postby Pretty_Blossom » April 6th, 2008, 5:39 pm

I forgot about it for a while. I never really finished it in my head. Might get back to it someday, but probably I'll never finish it. Oh, well.
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