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Please grade this poem out of 1-10!

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0
No votes
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5
1
10%
6
2
20%
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20%
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30%
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10%
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10%
 
Total votes : 10

Postby KronKron » August 5th, 2005, 9:21 pm

"assonance means getting the rhyme wrong"
From below the dragon dark comes forth,
Nithhogg flying from Nithafjoll;
The bodies of men on his wings he bears
(Section from the Voluspa)
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Postby NorkNork » August 5th, 2005, 9:26 pm

Yes, very good, Rita.
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Postby KronKron » August 5th, 2005, 9:31 pm

Is that picture erotic?
From below the dragon dark comes forth,
Nithhogg flying from Nithafjoll;
The bodies of men on his wings he bears
(Section from the Voluspa)
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Postby NorkNork » August 6th, 2005, 2:36 pm

"Oh, i think I haven't looked at it in 20 years, but i guess it is."

"Of course it is, just look at those tits!"
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Postby KronKron » August 6th, 2005, 9:31 pm

look at them tits tch tch
From below the dragon dark comes forth,
Nithhogg flying from Nithafjoll;
The bodies of men on his wings he bears
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Postby elf » October 29th, 2005, 8:30 pm

I gave you 8,for it's a nice poem and you used some awesome imagery!
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Postby NorkNork » October 30th, 2005, 11:36 am

Thanks :)
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Postby Findtherma » November 1st, 2005, 10:19 pm

Very nice.

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Postby bogieman » May 6th, 2007, 7:33 am

Interesting theme
I like poems that ryme but yours has something in it

Keep it up there are too few poets in this world
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